You Never Were on Time
Description
This poem is a poignant lament for a lost loved one, grappling with the devastating consequences of their choices and the lingering pain of their absence. The speaker desperately seeks solace in the memories and promises shared, but is left with an agonizing emptiness. The poem explores themes of grief, regret, and the futile attempt to understand the choices of those who have passed. The narrative is propelled by the repeated refrain, "You said it when you said goodbye," emphasizing the broken promises and the lingering heartbreak. The stark imagery of 'sugared rot' and 'death-laced line' paints a vivid picture of the destructive path the lost loved one chose. Through its raw emotion and evocative language, the poem captures the intense struggle with loss and the enduring power of love in the face of unimaginable tragedy. Comparable works include Emily Dickinson, Sylvia Plath